Wednesday, December 21, 2005

Last Night

last night, I walked home from school slowly
the snow and I were glittering like mad
I paused
and looked
and it seemed to freeze and rise before my eyes
winter was tingling in every part of me

then
it bit me
and I ran the
rest of the way home

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Jon Anderson's take:

(techno beat)
"Oh, how it bit you..."

Lauren said...

Koop,
You're the best! Thanks to everyone who has posted a comment so far. It makes me very happy!

Stevie B said...

Just don't become one of those comment-dependent bloggers, which results in only posting so that people will comment or your self-esteem will be lowered.

You know the type I'm talking about.

Lauren said...

I won't, I promise!